thesis intro

A thesis statement needs to be clear and strong, and not to long or people lose interest. Also we should try not to put our selves in it. What I think makes a strong intro paragraph, well I would have to say either the Hook or the thesis statement. The hook, because it draws people to read whatever you are writing about, and the thesis, because it tells the reader what you are writing about. These two things make the reader what to read your essay. Other wise it's boring and no one is going to want to read it.